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(Bad Ending)

"(Cinder) My cute little Ruby, you sleep well darling, I fun has only just started. {sleeps with Ruby} Nighty night my sweet little angel." "(White Fang Member) Boss, what do want to do with the other girls?" "(Cinder) Whatever the others wanna do with them, I've already got my precious rose here."

{refrigerator} "(Mercury) {forcefully kisses Weiss} I love the taste of Schnee in the morning! {forcefully kisses her neck}" "(Weiss) G-g-g-get o-o-o-off m-m-m-me!" "(Mercury) Relax, I'm trying to heat things up here, you should be happy." "(Weiss) S-s-s-swine!" "(Mercury) Hey, that was uncalled for. {picks up ice shard & strokes Weiss's body with it} Like that?" "(Weiss) S-s-s-stop that! {gasps}" "(Mercury) Oh you do like that. Well then. {licks scar} You taste delicious!" "(Weiss) Y-y-y-you w-w-w-weird-d-d-do!" "(Mercury) Call my what want ice girl, not gonna stop me from doing something devious to you. {smirks} Afterall we are on an unknown island with no communication and far away from any land that not even a telescope could see them." "(Weiss) {gasps} W-w-w-what?!" "(Mercury) That means no how much you try, no matter how much you scream or even hope your boy Neptune finds you! No chance." "(Weiss) N-n-n-nept-t-t-tune w-w-w-will f-f-f-find m-m-m-me!" "(Mercury) Oh no doubt he's looking for you, but he's looking in the wrong places even far from here." "(Weiss) B-b-b-bast-t-t-tard!" "(Mercury) Ooh feisty! Oh no, looks like your boobies have gone stiff from the cold, here let me help you warm up." "(Weiss) N-n-n-no s-s-s-st-t-t-top i-i-i-it! D-d-d-don't-t-t-t t-t-t-touch-ch-ch-ch m-m-m-me! Y-y-y-you f-f-f-fiend!" "(Mercury) Resist all you want baby, but I'm having my ice cream. {sucks on nipple}" "(Weiss) {gasps}"

{In the dungeons} "(Blake) {in mind} What's going on?! I can't see anything! Why can't I speak?! My hands and feet feeled cuffed on some sort of pole, I feel like hanging on to tree branch like a monkey by force! This mask is giving me a hard time to breathe!" "(Roman) Poor kitty-kitty, look at you, you look like a sad monkey, if only Sun was here to see you now, he'd probably get even more attracted to the catmonkey wannabe." "(Blake) Mmmmmph!" "(Roman) What's the matter, cat got your tongue? {chuckles}" "(Blake) Bfffard!" "(Roman) So Miss Belladonna, what am I going to with you?" "(Blake) Fuff fuu!" "(Roman) Stop shaking around, you'll only strain yourself. Hmm? Well there's many possiblities, I can roast you, I can maime you, I can break your bones, cut off those cute little ears of yours, probably even gouge your pretty eyes in the process, possibly even take your virginity away." "(Blake) Mmmmmph! {shakes} Mmmmph!" "(Roman) No that would be taking it to far, but then again...say kitty where's your tail? I think I should fix that." "(Blake) Mmmmmmmmmmph! {in mind} He's not thinking what I think he's thinking?!" "(Roman) {whistles and pins a cat's tail on Blake's bottom}" "(Blake) Mmmmmmmmmph! Ohf fuu fuffin fich!" "(Roman) There we go like pinnig a jackass! Now then. {spanks Blake's ass with whip}" "(Blake) Mmmmmph!" "(Roman) {spanks repeatingly} This what you get from not minding your own business!" "(Blake) Mmmph! Mmmmmph! Mmmmmmmmph! {starts to cry} Mmmmmph." "(Roman) My what a sore bottom. {rubs her bottom} Poor kitty-cat, there's plenty more where that came from." "(Blake) Mmmphmmmphmmph. {hears an electrical discharge} Mmmmph! Mmmmmmmmmph {shakes}" "(Roman) Oh, can you hear that? {sparks electric baton & puts it near Blake's ear} Are you scared?" "(Blake) Mmmmmph! Fuu bfffard!" "(Roman) {whispers in her ear} Are ready kitty-cat? {electrocutes her}" "(Blake) Mmmmmmmmmmmphmmmmmmmmmphmmmmmmphmmmmphmmmmmmmmmphmmmph!" "(Roman) Admit it, you like it. But haven't quite seemed to fry the poor pussy, let's fix that shall we?" "(Blake) {gets electrocuted in the crotch} Mmmaaaaaaaaaargh!" "(Roman) You're mine now Belladonna and you're gonna learn that the hard way my little pussycat. You'll be here for the rest of your life, so get used to being a play toy. {passionately kisses & licks Blake's navel & crotch}" "(Blake) {gasping and sweating} Mmmmmmmph."

{in the torture chamber} "(Yang) {in mind} I can't move! A ballgag?! I can't move my head! Where am I? Am I strapped to a bed Whats that big light?! Am I dead?!" "(Neo) {dark voice} Yaaaang? Yang my love, you've finally waken, how was your sleep?" "(Yang) Aaaaaagggaaggg!" "(Neo) {removes ballgag} Your blood was delicious, your body was delicious, I want more! {moves blanket off table to show different blades}" "(Yang) {can see with side of eye} Oh my god! You psychotic bitch! If you-{gets slapped}""(Neo) Sshh! Shall we get started? {pick 1 blade & puts it near Yang's face}" "(Yang) {panicks} Y...you crazy-" "(Neo) Hush now my burning flame. {pokes blade on Yang's nipples}" "(Yang) No! No! No! No! You've already raped me! What more do you want?! Ow! Ow!" "(Neo) {twisting the blade on nipple gently} I must do this, this has to happen, you will love it! Because you have to! You...have...no...other...choice! {stabs blade in nipple}" "(Yang) {screams in pain, shakes & cries} Yohou bihehehitch! I cahahahan't beliheheheve you juhuhus dihihid thahahat! {cries}" "(Neo) That's only just the beginning!" "(Yang) No...I can't take it anymore!" "(Neo) It's not your choice to make! {chips at Yang's hips}" "(Yang) Argh!" "(Neo) {sucks on bleeding nipple} Your blood is amazing! {picks up a drill}" "(Yang) {gasping} No...please...my body's taken enough." "(Neo) I say when it's enough! Don't you dare tell me otherwise! {pokes drill in Yang's bellybutton}" "(Yang) No! No please Neo I beg you don't do this please Neo don't! Please I'm sorry, I'll do anything you want! Just don't do it please! Neo I'm begging you please! Noooo! {gets drilled in the bellybutton & screams in pain & cries} Whyhehehehe!" "(Neo) Because piercing you is delicious! {licks stomach & prepares chained spikeball swinging top of Yang}" "(Yang) What is that?! Oh god please Neo don't!" "(Neo) {uses remote to open Yang's legs} Next." "(Yang) Neo! Neo don't do it please! Neo! I'll be your slave, you're bitch, anything! Neo no! No! {cries} Noho! Noho! Noho!" "(Neo) Have you forgotton Yang? You are my bitch. {inserts chained spikeball in Yang's crotch}" "(Yang) {screams in pain, shakes & cries} RUBY! IF YOU SEE THIS DON'T EVER GO THROUGH THIS!" "(Neo) Oh Yang, so persistant. {pulls on chain}" "(Yang) Aaaargh!"

{6 weeks later} "(Cinder) I think we earned our vacation don't you think Roman?" "(Roman) Yep, looking to this springbreak. Miss Kitty, can have my order please?" "(Blake) {wearing a maid costumes with chain & leash} Yes master, what will you have?" "(Roman) How about you served with cream. {pulls her leash & makes her sit on his lap} What do you think?" "(Blake) {blushes} Y-y-yes master." "(Cinder) {chuckles} Oh Roman you crack me up. Hmm? {sniffs drink} Ruby, are trying to drug me?" "(Ruby) {leg chained to ball next to Cinder} N...no." "(Cinder) Ruby, I'm  gonna have to punish you for that." "(Ruby) N-n-no don't. {tries to run but fails} I won't do it again! I'm sorry!" "(Cinder) Oh you will be. {takes Ruby away}" "(Ruby) Nooooooo!" "(Roman) Unbelivable! Hey how are the friends with benefits doing?" "(Emerald) Go die in a hole." "(Mercury) I don't mind." "(Emerald) Merc, shut up." "(Roman) So, you enjoyed the Schnee Express?" "(Mercury) Loved it, more enjoyable than doing it with Em." "(Emerald) {aims gun at Mercury} You say something?" "(Mercury) Just kidding! Hey speaking of Schnee, hey ice queen come on out here!" "(Weiss) {dressed up in see through fabric} Y-y-you called for me...master...Mercury." "(Mercury) Get over here! {grabs her by the hand} Who do you belong to?" "(Weiss) {blushes} Master...Mercury." "(Mercury) See she likes me!" "(Roman) Speaking of which, I wonder how Neo is doing?" "(Neo) {chuckles}" "(Yang) {naked, fiery dark purple, eyes go all red & hair goes black} Grrrrrr." "(Roman) Whoa Neo, don't know how you did it, but you got us a new secret weapon!" "(Neo) {dark voice and speaks in Yang's ear} Destroy Beacon and kill everyone." "(Yang) Grrrrrrrooooooaaaaaaaaar!"

The End
Here's the bad ending a little more explicit than my last ones8)
Which ending is better?
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Krontriolle Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2016
....I don't know what's more cringy; the grammar, or the way the rape is written.
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Cyclone-Wolf-Devil Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2016  Student Digital Artist
I know right? What a messed up kid I was back then...thinner too...with more hair...damn...
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Krontriolle Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2016
lol it's okay, i was messed up too, when i was an kid, i wrote an fanfic of courtney from tdi ripping off gwen's vagina with an beard razor, and burning her vagina, as 
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We all have fanfictions that makes us wish we skipped the emo-tween stage
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Cyclone-Wolf-Devil Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Yeah, though it was what first got me many watchers
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Krontriolle Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2016
mine just got me roasted lol
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Cyclone-Wolf-Devil Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Really? Well that means my first watchers were just perverts then
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Krontriolle Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2016
The lemons always bring the weaboos.
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Cyclone-Wolf-Devil Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2016  Student Digital Artist
That's true
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webies200 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2016
i wouldnt know i cant find any others :P
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Cyclone-Wolf-Devil Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2016  Student Digital Artist
That's because they got deleted ages ago
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Cipher111996 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I think this classifies as worst.
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:iconcyclone-wolf-devil:
Cyclone-Wolf-Devil Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Story or situation?
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Cipher111996 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Ending
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:iconcyclone-wolf-devil:
Cyclone-Wolf-Devil Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Student Digital Artist
lol what way to go right?8)
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Cipher111996 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
A bit brighter but not too brighter would be better.
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